Thursday, 9 March 2017

The Piano

J.W Year 5      This is an extract This Piano (my version)

A visible weightless hat was dropped on his head. A medic sign was on the front. He ran up to a burnt wall next to his brother. He nodded at Ben (his brother) to make a sign to shoot. Ben went out to shoot but he was a second late and he got shot. He tried with all of his might to try and get it out but helplessly couldn't. He felt guilty because he was a medical soldier and he couldn't save him. His last words were, "Save yourself." He ran from the wall and left his brother to rot in darkness and he knew no more.



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