Thursday, 9 March 2017

The piano paragraph:3

One specific memory was stuck in his mind. All of a sudden,the sounds of guns being released. Shooting the ground,the smell of smoke drifted up his nose. Bang! His brother
was shot,by the over powering Germans! Sprinting over to his brother trying to save him. The bullet was stuck. He was blaming himself. Picking at the bullet he couldn't save his brother! In a pool of red blood, his brother lay still sleeping and not awakening. Starting at his brothers grey eyes while his brothers skin turned paler and paler. "Help!" He shouted out.  Sadly his brother passed away. How would he service whiteout his brother? He had been wanting to relive that moment, save him but he couldn't. 

M.S Year  6

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