Thursday, 9 March 2017

The 2nd paragraph of my flash back story -The Piano

Then he remembered back in the war. It was a gloomy and emotional day. They could hear planes flying in the distance. They were low and sounded like prehistoric birds soaring across the sky. Gunshots were falling. The old man's brother fell to the ground. The old man was a medic and tried to save him. Sadly he couldn't save his brother. He was shot and died.

 by A.O.      Year 5

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